{"id":1289,"date":"2015-05-21T08:13:34","date_gmt":"2015-05-21T15:13:34","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/?p=1289"},"modified":"2015-10-07T19:56:02","modified_gmt":"2015-10-08T02:56:02","slug":"why-your-cold-emails-suck","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/why-your-cold-emails-suck\/","title":{"rendered":"Why Your Cold Emails Suck"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"http:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/goats-and-trash.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"alignnone  wp-image-1299\" src=\"https:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/goats-and-trash.jpg\" alt=\"goats and trash- why your cold emails suck\" width=\"414\" height=\"204\" srcset=\"https:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/goats-and-trash.jpg 640w, https:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/goats-and-trash-300x148.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 414px) 100vw, 414px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Did everyone somehow\u00a0forget that their sales prospects were humans too?<\/p>\n<p>How did we reach the point that people think a 10-15% open rate is &#8220;good,&#8221; and that a 3 paragraph long email with a 2% response rate was awesome?<\/p>\n<p>Yes, sales is a number&#8217;s game, but people seem to have forgotten that there&#8217;s a living breathing person on the other end of the inbox.<\/p>\n<p>Everyone is looking for the fastest and easiest way to increase their sales revenue. There&#8217;s a hope and belief that there&#8217;s some kind of \u00a0&#8220;hack&#8221; which will magically triple sales, but if you don&#8217;t have your sales fundamentals right, even the best automation software won&#8217;t make a difference.<\/p>\n<p>There&#8217;s 3\u00a0mistakes I see almost every sales person making over and over.<\/p>\n<h3>The #1 Reason Why Your Cold Emails Suck: You Don&#8217;t Understand Your Audience At All<\/h3>\n<p>Please don&#8217;t bother sending cold emails at all if you&#8217;re not going to take the time to define who your buyer persona is.<\/p>\n<p>How can you expect to write cold emails that get responses if you don&#8217;t even know who you&#8217;re emailing?!<\/p>\n<p>Sending a cold email campaign to a list of 100,000 crappy\u00a0leads you bought\u00a0from some sketchy website is usually a bad idea to begin with. Not doing any work to clean the list and segment it by title or other firmographic criteria is just lazy and is guaranteed to flop.<\/p>\n<p>Why on earth do you want to send this much volume?<\/p>\n<p>Because you want to get 100 responses and you only have a 0.1% response rate?<\/p>\n<p><strong>This is a terrible plan.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Spamming the internet might help you fill your pipeline with leads in the short-term, but is not a sustainable strategy and burns through valuable leads.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s basic resource management: there is not an infinite supply of leads, and if you spam with a high enough volume you will quickly run out of leads (although your mail server will probably get blacklisted way before that).<\/p>\n<p>Instead of polluting everyone&#8217;s inbox with untargeted garbage, which can destroy your business&#8217; reputation in no time at all, why not take a more thoughtful approach and focus?<\/p>\n<p>Yes, sales is a number&#8217;s game, and sending on-one-one individual emails isn&#8217;t time or cost-effective, but neither is throwing spaghetti on the wall and praying that it will stick.<\/p>\n<p>Winning sales organizations have one thing in common: they understand the importance of velocity.<\/p>\n<p>There is a trade-off between speed\/quantity and results\/quality, but there is an optimal point where you can get the maximum volume for the most results\/responses, and this is the point of\u00a0<strong>optimal sales velocity<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p>I know this because I insist that our clients send a lower volume of emails to a laser-targeted list, and still get them more total responses than they got sending to a large untargeted list.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Example<\/strong>: One of my clients\u00a0wanted to send 10,000 emails, and had a 0.2% response rate. This means they got 20 responses for every 10,000 emails.<\/p>\n<p><strong>I sent 223 emails and got them 38 responses.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Instead of burning through their entire list, my targeted email campaign\u00a0only used 2.23% of their regular list and got them almost twice as many results for the same amount of effort.<\/p>\n<h3>The #2 Reason Why Your Cold Emails Suck:\u00a0You&#8217;re a Terrible Writer Who Needs to Learn Basic Copywriting<\/h3>\n<p>I&#8217;m collecting a treasure trove of terribly written emails in a folder labeled &#8220;LOL BAD emails.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>And clients, friends and colleagues send me dozens of new ones to add to my collection each week.<\/p>\n<p>I realize writing isn&#8217;t everyone&#8217;s strong-suit, but do people really think they can\u00a0copy-paste generic email templates that were written over a decade ago and still get results?<\/p>\n<p>They&#8217;re not horrible templates, but they&#8217;ve suffered the plight of the &#8220;tragedy of the commons.&#8221; Any working professional who has been around for a few years can recognize these &#8220;classic templates&#8221; a mile away, and send them straight to the trash.<\/p>\n<p>And then there&#8217;s the emails that look like short novels.<\/p>\n<p>One of the worst cold emails I have seen had\u00a0more than 1652 words!<\/p>\n<p>I doubt anyone would actually take the time to read through this email unless they had a &#8220;twisted obsession&#8221; with bad writing like I do.<\/p>\n<p>And of course you have\u00a0the same dozen or so mistakes repeated over, all of which leave prospects racing to hit &#8220;delete&#8221; or &#8220;spam.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Copywriting takes practice, but I seriously wonder if anyone actually reads what they wrote (<em>or what someone wrote for them<\/em>) aloud to themselves before they press send. If they did they probably wouldn&#8217;t be sending this garbage.<\/p>\n<h3>The #3 Reason Why Cold Emails Suck:\u00a0You&#8217;re Using the Wrong Tools &amp; Misconfigured Your Mail Server<\/h3>\n<p>Even the best cold emails can have deliverability problems if your mail server isn&#8217;t correctly configured.<\/p>\n<p>This wasn&#8217;t something I was closely paying attention to and checking, but a few of my clients recently had very low open rates, which made me suspicious. I always have at least a 35% open rate (and that&#8217;s on the low side), and they had around 9% opens or less.<\/p>\n<p>I was perplexed and frustrated.<\/p>\n<p>My copy was good and their business was amazing.<\/p>\n<p>I immediately assumed that they had a garbage list, and so I asked\u00a0for another copy of the CSV they had been sending to take another look. But there was nothing wrong. It was a good list.<\/p>\n<p>I was baffled for half a day.<\/p>\n<p>And then I asked them to add me to their CSV and do a mail merge to my email address.<\/p>\n<p>Suddenly it all made sense. By analyzing the header data from the email they had merged to me I realized their servers had been horribly misconfigured.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s an honest and simple mistake that was easily corrected, but the effect of this error had almost completely tanked their campaign.<\/p>\n<p>As soon as this problem was resolved they started to get about a <strong>10% response rate<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p>It was crazy what a difference it made.<\/p>\n<p>Spammers obviously suffer from major inboxing and deliverability issues, but even I was amazed at what a big impact a 5-minute tweak had on their email campaigns&#8217; results.<\/p>\n<p>(<em>I&#8217;ll be writing a blog post and doing a webinar on this very topic soon, so stay tuned<\/em>!)<\/p>\n<h3>Surprise Announcement: We&#8217;re Writing A Book About Cold Email!<\/h3>\n<p>I&#8217;ve been meaning to create a book and course on cold-email for a while, but as the business grows and we take on more clients this always took a &#8220;back-seat&#8221; to other priorities.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m pretty good about blogging and writing each week, but creating an entire book seemed like a daunting task Haley and I never had enough time for.<\/p>\n<p>And then I remembered my collaboration on the sequel to Aaron Ross&#8217;\u00a0<em>Predictable Revenue Book<\/em>, titled\u00a0<em>Tripling Your Sales<\/em>. Aaron released the book in 3 bite-sized pieces that created the sequel to his best-selling e-book, and that seemed so much less daunting.<\/p>\n<p>The Salesfolk team is pleased to announce that we will be coming out with our <strong><em>Ultimate Guide to Cold Email<\/em><\/strong> e-book in late August.<img loading=\"lazy\" class=\" wp-image-1276 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Salesfolk-book-guide-cover-human-786x1024.jpg\" alt=\"Salesfolk book guide cover human\" width=\"312\" height=\"407\" srcset=\"https:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Salesfolk-book-guide-cover-human.jpg 786w, https:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Salesfolk-book-guide-cover-human-230x300.jpg 230w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 312px) 100vw, 312px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>The first of the three guides is called: &#8220;<em><strong>The Human&#8217;s Guide to Writing Cold Emails<\/strong><\/em>.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s full of actionable advice that will help you write cold emails that don&#8217;t sound spammy or seem like they&#8217;re written by a robot.<\/p>\n<p>You can learn more about it <a href=\"http:\/\/salesfolk.com\/blog\/how-to-write-cold-emails-human\/\" target=\"_blank\">here<\/a>, or check it out for yourself by downloading it using the form below:<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>Don&#8217;t be a robot! 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