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Quick Fixes That Will Get This Prospecting Email More Responses

March 13, 2018 By Heather Leave a Comment

Recently I asked some folks on LinkedIn to share their sales prospecting emails with me so that I could do some live feedback and edits.

For this particular email, I chose to just do feedback rather than edits, since I didn’t have enough context to do more serious revisions.

Take a look at my feedback to see how the sender can improve their sales prospecting email and targeting in order to get more positive responses from qualified leads.

Do you have questions about this email or other sales prospecting emails? Just ask in the comments, and I’ll try to respond directly or in my next video.

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